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How to Write Killer Headlines That
Convert
The Most Important Part of Your Sales
Letter.
Paul Smithson - 27th November 2008
The headline is probably the single most
important part of your sales letter. It’s your chance to
grab attention, captivate your audience, and cause them to
eagerly read the rest of your ad copy. If your headline
is a winner your revenues can go through the roof, but if your
headline is poor your conversion rate will probably be abysmal
and your profits will take a big hit.
Writing great headlines does take a little practice, but there
are a few things that you can do to help you increase the
chances of writing a headline that grabs the visitors attention
and encourages them to read on and not click the back button
and return to the web page from which they
came.
The first step is to think of the potential
problems your buyers might face. Ideally these should be
problems that your visitors are desperate to find an answer to,
and problems that your product or service can
solve.
Write out a list of all the problems you
can think of and then sort them into an order of importance as
far as the number of people having that problem are concerned.
At the top of the list will be the problems that the majority
of your target market are having and at the bottom of the list
are the minor problems that only a handful of potential
customers will relate to.
Now make a list of several headlines you
think might address the issue that you believe is of most
importance to your visitors. These headlines should
address their primary concern, and mention your product as
being the solution either directly or indirectly (i.e. It is
implied that by reading on they will get an answer to their
problem).
You could use numbers in the headline as
many people love statistics. Headlines such as the following
can work very well.
- Reduce your tax bill by 43% in just 12
months
- Why do 8 out of 10 veterinary surgeons now recommend XYZ
rather than the leading brand
- Use Widget Wonder for just one week and watch your sales
triple and your refunds go down by over
50%!
Using verifiable statistics can grab
attention and also lend credibility to you and your product.
Don’t make up numbers as that is dishonest. Use only figures
and statistics that could be verified if the need
arose.
Another technique for writing eye-catching
headlines is to use a teaser to entice visitors to read
further. People don’t like to be left in limbo. They prefer to
have the whole story. By using teasers in your headlines you
are creating a subconscious desire to complete the story and
this leads people directly into reading your
copy.
Here are several examples of teaser
headlines.
- Find out how one 73 year old woman used a
common household item to cure her arthritis.
- What do one out of every ten New Yorkers do that all Italians
do every day of the week?
- A guaranteed way to retire in 10 years no matter how old you
currently are
It’s hard to read any of these headlines
without wanting to find out more, which is why teasers can be
so effective.
It’s also worth remembering that people buy
based on emotions, and then justify their purchase with
logic. When writing headlines try to focus on emotions
and impulses, because logic doesn’t sell products - it
justifies purchases after they’ve been
made.
Once you have your initial list of possible
headlines you need to test them out to see which one performs
best. Don’t just guess - test, test and then test again. You
may think you know which one will perform best, but you could
be very wrong, because what you think will work isn’t
necessarily what will work most effectively with your visitors.
Don’t take that chance. Test each of your potential headlines
to see which one works best in terms of maximizing conversions
and sales.
It can take a while to settle on a winning
a headline, but it is time well spent that is guaranteed to
reap rewards.
About Paul Smithson -
Paul Smithson is the founder of Intellimon and the driving
force behind the best-selling XSitePro web site development
tool. Since graduating in Business Strategy and Direct
Marketing from two of Europe’s leading business schools, Paul
has set up five multi-million dollar companies, one of which is
now owned by the BBC. His areas of expertise include business
strategy, e-commerce, on-line and off-line marketing, software
development, and maximizing the potential of on-line
businesses.
For more information about
this, and many other Internet Marketing-related
topics, visit Paul Smithson's site,
www.xsitepro.com. |
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